Is starts decent, one it picks up it was a REALLY REALLY good moment, however... The (I assume) actual melody gets completely lost, and while it's still really good, it'd have been an easy 5/5 if the actually good foreground wasn't in the background. I mean, I guess you might have put it there intentionally, but it just doesn't sound so good there imo. (Just to be sure you actually understand what I mean, there's this melody at 0:30 that's a bit too covered by the rest of the song XD)