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The song has a really nice melody! I really enjoyed it! :D

vinceblake responds:

Thank you very much! ;)

Interesting... I definitely prefer the original, but this is pretty good! :D

Too bad it ends like that...

I LOVE the melody here! There are a few things, however, that I don't particularly like.

The foreground is oftentimes too repetitive. I'd expect such an energetic song to change all the time, and because of the foreground melody, it feels almost the same.

The ending isn't really great, either. I feel like ending the song at 5:21 would have been better.

The melody is amazing though, so still gonna give 4,5/5

DatBoiWill3539061 responds:

Thanks for the feedback it helps a lot
Also I am not that good at endings

I don't mean to be rude, but really, there's basically no reason to upload things like this. If you want to upload music, practice a bit before doing so, or at least upload something that's more complex than percussion anyone could make in a minute or two.

I hope you understand what I mean. Peace!

The melodies are really good, but why is it SOOO REPETITIVE >.<

Interesting... the melody is alright at the beginning, but then it just gets weird and super repetitive for over half of the song.

The beginning and 2:20-2:45 are pretty cool, the rest is kinda bad :/

Chriswin2019 responds:

Thanks for the comment, I will work on making better tracks soon!

The song builds up way too slow. Even after the beginning the whole song wants to sound epic, but it never does due to something strongly limiting it. Feels kinda like the song doesn't have any higher frequencies and the melody feels dull because of that. It doesn't allow the song to fully 'bloom'.

Too bad because the melody seems amazing

Edit: Sound wayyy better now, although the main melody is still sometimes a bit too quiet in my opinion.

no-qn responds:

new version uploaded
Thanks p22

This song has really good melody! :)

The percussion is too loud in my opinion though. Also I completely didn't expect such a relaxing track to get so dynamic at 1:41, it doesn't really go that well with the rest of the song, plus something just doesn't feel right there, maybe way too much is happening at once.

I also really don't like the long silence at 0:35 and 2:46 and how the song changes after them, almost makes it seem like different songs put into one. (especially before and after 0:35 the song feels different)

Overall good song! the amazing melody is a very strong side of it!

RigelGD responds:

hehe i understand you, that song has a purpose to have two styles of music mixed in one cause i wanted to try a different thing, that is the reason the song have a huge dynamic changes 7w7. But thank you so much for your opinion :D

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