pawles22's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Another small track in major]

Eh, not my type of music. Also, the first minute is a bit empty, it's just the same short melody repeated over and over *shrug*.

The drop after the first minute, though! :D
The background's doing a really nice job here!

I like the ending :P

LeruoME responds:

not a serious track

[Asgore Theme (Cover)]

I DIG IT! Definitely Better than the original :v

TheAlphaTeamGD responds:

Awww gosh thanks! It took me long to make and to think its better the original makes my day =^w^=

[UwA]

I can totally see why you see it as a great song, though it is absolutely not for me. While I absolutely love the samples with my whole heart, I need wayyyy more interesting melodies than that.

Sorry, this isn't probably super fair, but when I hear such samples, I immediately expect very high level of melodies (some that would satisfy me, which is hard lol) from the song, because songs like that qualify into my faves.

PS: wait why am I in the tags again? :thinking:

LeruoME responds:

Thanks !
In this track, I didn't want to make a lot of well-worked melodies and I wanted to work on the ambience and the textures. Besides, I'm not very good at making melodies. But don't worry, I'll put more melodies in the extented version and the next track have an insane melody ! I think this feeling of lack of melodies is due to the low level of high frequencies (which is a mistake of me)

PS: You're in all my tags lol

[Illusion Suite]

The melodies are pretty good. I like the feeling this song has. Most samples are also great. I don't like something about this track though, but I can't quite tell what's the problem... :/

HyperImaginative responds:

Thank you! I've been trying to figure out the problem too. I think it's probably lacking a more natural feel. I'll have a few more songs releasing tomorrow.

[Deltarune OST - The World Revolving (E.House)]

A really good remix of this song! Maybe it's just me, but I feel like the samples could have sounded just a bit better, though.

grihadash60 responds:

In program samples sounded good. Maybe, rendering in mp3 down a bit quality

[SONG OF VOID]

Too much sharp 8-bit sounds put together, which makes it more chaotic with every sample you add. Also, you can't just leave empty spaces in a song, even at the beginning. However, the melody itself is seriously AMAZING!

Change those samples into some smoother ones, mix it better together, add some better background (the beginning's freaking empty!), then if you have an idea add some great leading melody and you've got yourself an AWESOME piece of music! :D

This has potential! :)

Glitchy01 responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I've made it a lot better from it's previous version!

[Deadbushia - Star Surfing]

Those sounds don't go together well in my opinion... like, at all. The melodies are REALLY great and the samples are awesome by themselves as well, but I don't enjoy listening to it as a whole, at least at the beginning. Later it gets a lot better!

An interesting, really decent song. However, I don't enjoy it as much as I could.

DeadbushiaYT responds:

Thanks dude! I try to experiment with different sounds to keep my music original, sometimes things just dont work, and sometimes they do. I think some EQ on the distorted guitar part would probably help a lot, but there isn't much I can do now. Thanks for your review though!

[Hype]

It's good, tho even a title screen needs a bit of variation IMO.

KalmarExpress responds:

You’re right, I still have the files for it so if someone wanted to add or take away anything it can be done. Thanks for the feedback!

[Soulless Streets]

Creepy af >.<
But great!

makcau responds:

Thanks! XD