pawles22's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[TdIrToOpV(1.11)]

With each update this is getting better and better! :D
some things after 2:50 still feel a bit too sharp
It's still a bit stiff and repetitive sometimes, but like I said - this is actually a really decent song now in my opinion!
I'm just a bit sad that you removed 0:55. It was harsh, but it could sound really good after some modifications! :(

Keep going! ^^

[Masterwork]

The beginning is awesome. It becomes pure harshness at 0:50 though D:
2:03 becomes cool again.
2:32 ouch my ears.
2:42 Ouch my ears pure harshness again.
4:07 *EAR BLEED AGAIN*
So like I said, I like the melody. I DON'T like the ear bleed parts :3
I really tried to find a reason to rate at least 2,5 but I couldn't find one so 2,0 is the highest I can give unfortunately :(

QruintroX responds:

Do you mean the sounds that sound like a old-school jumping sound? or one sound that sounds drunk?

[Transience]

THIS IS SOOOO LOUD!!!
The melody is nice. The sound is a bit too harsh though. :/
I can hear some really not cool distortion there :(
If not this, the track would be a lot better! :3

MOR5ECOD3 responds:

Tru, and the synths are a bit messed up imo

[The Sentence]

This is cool! The sound seems a bit too harsh though. I absolutely LOVE the main melody though!!! :D
Would rate 3,75 if I could ^^
It just seems a bit too empty for me. I would add some sound in the background or something, so it sounds more juicy :v

Cocolin67 responds:

Nice to hear that and thank you for your comment. I will add some sound in the background in
the next music !

[Jump Bloq]

It's not bad. The sound just seems wayyy too harsh for my ears :(

[TdIrToOpV(1.1)]

Why do so many people misread my nickname? >.<
There's only one "s", it's pawles22! :3

Hmmm, I've just noticed that I could have given more constructive feedback last time.
This time it actually sounds a lot better in my honest opinion. Not really sure why and if anything really changed, but I like this more now ^^

It's good that you didn't remove those parts, slight reworking is better than removing!

0:23-0:39 somehow sounds good now, not sure if you've changed anything or is it just me :)
In my opinion you could make 0:55 less harsh! And I would also make it a little quieter.
1:32 still seems really out of blue, that's a real change in the melody. But it's not bad, so... I guess it doesn't matter THAT much.
The 2:30+ part is a good idea! It just seems A LITTLE bit too chaotic in my opinion! :D

But of course, your opinion is the most important! Like you said, if you like some part, then keep it! The most important thing for you is to like what you create! :D

Keep going!

dminikgeometrydash responds:

Sorry for this mistake with nikname(i have already corrected it(or fixed?))
Thank you so much^_^
I’ll fix(or correct?) 0:55, and I’ll think about part 1:32!