pawles22's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nightmare]

Nice background music! I would just spice it up a bit, add something more and it would be REALLY good! :)

[Mass Bass - non. (Test)]

This is AWESOME for a beginner! I would just add some more "feel" into it, for example I feel like the melody that starts at 0:23 is a little 'numb', I mean it feels too monotonous for this track! But like I said, if you're a beginner, this is GREAT! :3

N0JU1CE responds:

Thanks for the feedback, yeah i felt myself that the part could have definitely been improved upon. Was not completely sure how, but i will figure it out once i practice a bit more. Glad you liked it :D

[Lost in forest]

This isn't bad! :D gets too repetitive for most of the song, but it's still pretty good.
Btw, I feel like some of the things loop pretty poorly :(
Also, 2:40 - ends out of blue.
But overall it's good!

rayboymusic responds:

Thanx

[eNvil]

Pretty decent! :3

[Beatin bounce]

Seem realllly too chaotic. But it's not awful! :)
Can get a boring after a while, too.
Try to work on some melody, so it doesn't sound like total chaos! :3
And don't make such huge silence parts, because now it's just some random stuff put together.
But keep making music and you'll make awesome stuff in no time! :)

[Loop cool et sympa]

This is awesome! Although in my honest opinion after 1:03 it's too overwhelming :)
Also, it doesn't really loop well, so it's not really Loop, but that's not as important! Keep it up! :D

[Cold Cage]

In the beginning some of the things seem really chaotic.
0:30 - I don't really understand this moment and why this snare repeats so fast, seems out of sync for me.
I really like the drop! :D
And the rest of the track is awesome, too! Overall pretty good! :3

BTW I love the ending!

[My Rage]

I enjoy listening to it! There are some things that I personally don't like, but that's just me. It's overall pretty cool!

[Fin Heureuse]

It's not something I'd like to listen to. Not because it's objectively. bad or something, but it's not a type of song that I like. Objectively I'd say it's good!

[Acid sans prétention]

This is cool. Too monotonous in my honest opinion, but it's certainly not a bad track! :3

LeruoME responds:

Yes I know but I am a beginner and I did it very fast ! Thanks !