This is a really nice melody! I just don't get why 0:27 even exists lol. It just destroys the song honestly :/
Also, why is it so short? There's so much potential here!
This is a really nice melody! I just don't get why 0:27 even exists lol. It just destroys the song honestly :/
Also, why is it so short? There's so much potential here!
I'm flattered to hear that you see potential in it. If you feel like it, you are free to remix and do whatever you please with this track. As for it's brief length, I guess my excuse is that I wasn't really putting my 100% into this since music isn't really my forte. Your comment has made me consider experimenting with the medium more, though.
The song has a really nice melody! I really enjoyed it! :D
Thank you very much! ;)
I LOVE the melody here! There are a few things, however, that I don't particularly like.
The foreground is oftentimes too repetitive. I'd expect such an energetic song to change all the time, and because of the foreground melody, it feels almost the same.
The ending isn't really great, either. I feel like ending the song at 5:21 would have been better.
The melody is amazing though, so still gonna give 4,5/5
Thanks for the feedback it helps a lot
Also I am not that good at endings
Interesting... the melody is alright at the beginning, but then it just gets weird and super repetitive for over half of the song.
The beginning and 2:20-2:45 are pretty cool, the rest is kinda bad :/
Thanks for the comment, I will work on making better tracks soon!
The song builds up way too slow. Even after the beginning the whole song wants to sound epic, but it never does due to something strongly limiting it. Feels kinda like the song doesn't have any higher frequencies and the melody feels dull because of that. It doesn't allow the song to fully 'bloom'.
Too bad because the melody seems amazing
Edit: Sound wayyy better now, although the main melody is still sometimes a bit too quiet in my opinion.
new version uploaded
Thanks p22
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