0:14 is... Kind of sudden to be honest. Some notes also sound really chaotic, at least for me. For the most part you can find really nice melody in this overall chaos, but sometimes it's just... Weird, if you know what I mean. The song also misses some variety! It's basically the some melody played over and over! Gotta spice it up a little bit! :D
Overall I can't say I disliked it, but... I don't really like it much, either. U can see some really nice potential in here, though! :)