pawles22's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[F-777 - T-Rex]

Woah, nice track :O

F-777 responds:

Woah, nice review. O.O

[Masterwork]

The beginning is awesome. It becomes pure harshness at 0:50 though D:
2:03 becomes cool again.
2:32 ouch my ears.
2:42 Ouch my ears pure harshness again.
4:07 *EAR BLEED AGAIN*
So like I said, I like the melody. I DON'T like the ear bleed parts :3
I really tried to find a reason to rate at least 2,5 but I couldn't find one so 2,0 is the highest I can give unfortunately :(

QruintroX responds:

Do you mean the sounds that sound like a old-school jumping sound? or one sound that sounds drunk?

[Transience]

THIS IS SOOOO LOUD!!!
The melody is nice. The sound is a bit too harsh though. :/
I can hear some really not cool distortion there :(
If not this, the track would be a lot better! :3

MOR5ECOD3 responds:

Tru, and the synths are a bit messed up imo

[The Sentence]

This is cool! The sound seems a bit too harsh though. I absolutely LOVE the main melody though!!! :D
Would rate 3,75 if I could ^^
It just seems a bit too empty for me. I would add some sound in the background or something, so it sounds more juicy :v

Cocolin67 responds:

Nice to hear that and thank you for your comment. I will add some sound in the background in
the next music !

[TdIrToOpV(1.1)]

Why do so many people misread my nickname? >.<
There's only one "s", it's pawles22! :3

Hmmm, I've just noticed that I could have given more constructive feedback last time.
This time it actually sounds a lot better in my honest opinion. Not really sure why and if anything really changed, but I like this more now ^^

It's good that you didn't remove those parts, slight reworking is better than removing!

0:23-0:39 somehow sounds good now, not sure if you've changed anything or is it just me :)
In my opinion you could make 0:55 less harsh! And I would also make it a little quieter.
1:32 still seems really out of blue, that's a real change in the melody. But it's not bad, so... I guess it doesn't matter THAT much.
The 2:30+ part is a good idea! It just seems A LITTLE bit too chaotic in my opinion! :D

But of course, your opinion is the most important! Like you said, if you like some part, then keep it! The most important thing for you is to like what you create! :D

Keep going!

dminikgeometrydash responds:

Sorry for this mistake with nikname(i have already corrected it(or fixed?))
Thank you so much^_^
I’ll fix(or correct?) 0:55, and I’ll think about part 1:32!

[Freedom]

Neat! This is great! It gives an awesome vibe of happiness! :D
Although 2:00 is too loud imho.

Love it!

ItzBiisax responds:

i know it was loud 2:00. and i fixed it! (a Little bit)

[TdIrToOpV]

It's cool. It would be very good but I dislike the parts 0:23-0:39 and 0:55-1:11. 1:32 sounds really out of blue in my honest opinion... 2:07 too... but the rest is awesome! ;)

dminikgeometrydash responds:

Thanks for your feedback)

[Multiversal]

Ehhh, I find the percussion annoying... it doesn't suit the melody in my opinion. And this track's too empty, I would add some stuff in the background!

Too bad, because I like the melody itself! It's really good :3
This has potential!

XmegaaAAa responds:

Me too, I'm not that proud of myself. But I'll just keep "positiving" and trying harder next time ;)

[Free game song 1]

Definitely not a bad track! Unfortunately, because of the harshness of the sound, I had enough after 2 minutes of listening. This does not make the music itself bad, but listening to basically the same melody with these sounds is a little difficult in my opinion. :)

andresfelipeibanezcu responds:

thanks for the opinion I will keep it in mind for future creations as is my first track and one is learning and if it is quite repetitive until I think.
thanks for commenting and for listening
Enjoy the life