pawles22's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nephilim]

Hmm... Definitely not bad! :D
It could definitely sound a lot better (I'm just gonna say that it doesn't sound bad, but it could be even better)
I would love to hear some more variation in this track, so it's not the same melody over and over! :)
Overall, pretty nice track. :3

DarkInsaneSpark responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) You're not wrong, my music does end up sounding the same after a while, it's a bad habit of mine haha, I'll see if I can improve upon it in future projects!

[New Hope]

Some sounds are a bit too harsh in my opinion. But overall very good track! :)

LordJavivi responds:

Oh, man, Thanks, Your opinion is very important. I will work more that.

[The Real 16-bit party is starting now!]

A bit stiff, but pretty nice! :3

JustDen responds:

Thanks!

[Mass Bass - non. (Test)]

This is AWESOME for a beginner! I would just add some more "feel" into it, for example I feel like the melody that starts at 0:23 is a little 'numb', I mean it feels too monotonous for this track! But like I said, if you're a beginner, this is GREAT! :3

N0JU1CE responds:

Thanks for the feedback, yeah i felt myself that the part could have definitely been improved upon. Was not completely sure how, but i will figure it out once i practice a bit more. Glad you liked it :D

[Lost in forest]

This isn't bad! :D gets too repetitive for most of the song, but it's still pretty good.
Btw, I feel like some of the things loop pretty poorly :(
Also, 2:40 - ends out of blue.
But overall it's good!

rayboymusic responds:

Thanx

[Acid sans prétention]

This is cool. Too monotonous in my honest opinion, but it's certainly not a bad track! :3

LeruoME responds:

Yes I know but I am a beginner and I did it very fast ! Thanks !

[Swipe]

Very short, but it's nice. Good work, I love it! ^^

Appalach responds:

Thanks!

[My old 8-bit work]

The melody is overall just fine, but... Ouch, sorry, my ears can't handle this.

Naptaston responds:

Yes, of course!
But this is my old music.

[Bright Stars]

Very cool music, I love how happy it is. :)

ShinsukeIto responds:

Thank you for your review! :)